I liked a lot of this, but something was rubbing me the wrong way. Abandoned this one unfinished, but will try to take a different spin on it sometime soon.
Just a suggestion, try a different perspective? I love the balloon but the perspective of the children and the balloon seems off. Maybe even shift the painting on the canvas. I honestly don't paint all that often, take it or leave it.
It could be something as simple as the shape of the hot air balloon. It might just have to look more tapered at the bottom to make the eye believe what it is....Even though we all know what it is, sometimes you have to convince the brain.
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Just a suggestion, try a different perspective? I love the balloon but the perspective of the children and the balloon seems off. Maybe even shift the painting on the canvas. I honestly don't paint all that often, take it or leave it.
I like it for what it is! Great shot, good color and light. maybe a touch more contrast?
Great painting,love the intense color and soft focus background.
It could be something as simple as the shape of the hot air balloon. It might just have to look more tapered at the bottom to make the eye believe what it is....Even though we all know what it is, sometimes you have to convince the brain.
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